"It also sees me learning to plot on the job, thus the exceedingly
halfassed blackmail plot."
I hope you know I meant the characters' plot was halfassed, not the
author's. I really liked the way you handled it. I liked that Jeff
thought it was a big deal, how he thought so many later bad things
flowed from it, when it was only a big deal in his life. Everyone else
forgot it pretty quickly.
Well, I think I'll go put on my Early CD by Scritti Politti. Thanks for
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