Re: RARA-AVIS: KISS ME DEADLY (May the Force Be With You)

Date: 10 Dec 2007

In a message dated 12/10/07 5:34:17 PM, writes:

> > not many noir stories end with the hero receiving a
> > medal, military
> > commission and chase kiss on the cheek from a
> > princess
> *******************************************************
> Sure, but he might receive a medal of valor like Joe
> Pistone did, and a kiss from a society dame. You have
> to revise the story to work within the new context.

********* okay. he gets the medal so the military can cover up the covert, illegal activities he did on behalf of well-connected, rogue elements. and he gets a kiss but that's all he'll ever get again since he got his dingus blown off in the process

John Lau

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