Re: RARA-AVIS: Re: How Much Background?

Date: 13 May 2003

I was irritated by several things in THE LAST DETECTIVE, but what really got me was that near the end, when the third-person viewpoint shifted rapidly, there were little headings to tell me whose viewpoint I was getting. I'm pretty slow, but I can usually figure stuff like that out without much prompting. It was unnecessary and it took me out of the story.

Bill Crider

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