Re: RARA-AVIS: Re: HAMMETT: Cynical Hammett (Was: Ned Beaumont)

Anthony Smith (ansmith@netdoor.com)
Sat, 18 Apr 1998 16:13:43 -0500 > In the present era, many novels are grossly padded. Robert B. Parker has
> been doing this for years. In some cases, the plot would barely suffice
> for a short-short. We hear about Spenser's jogging and gym habits, about
> the dog, about his cooking, about his sex with the insufferable Susan,
> about politics, and so on.
Well, I take it you would prefer a straight detective story without the
external characterizations? Hmmmm. For me, writing is not about the plot
alone. There are only so many plots. I enjoy seeing the lives of
characters, which make them feel more alive to me than movie-like
stereotypes. Take Lawrence Block's _When the Sacred Ginmill Closes_. Not
a lot of plot. Lots of interactions between friends, good dialogue,
description of New York, lots of Scudder walking around. But this is a
great novel. And still short.

> And even James Lee Burke, an author I much respect, has padded some of
> his novels ("Dixie City Jam" is a fairly clear example) with endless
> descriptions of the Bayou, dead cypress, alligators and alligator gars,
> his own bait shop, and so on. Burke really can write, and I forgive him
> somewhat, but sometimes the padding jumps at the reader.
To me, when Burke does cut back a lot, like in his recent _Cimmaron Rose_,
I am not as interested. I thought in that book, the scenes were too short,
and there wasn't enough description. I had a hard time getting a handle on
the world he was trying to conjure there. As for the Louisiana novels, I
love his descriptions. Burke was a literary writer before he began the
detective novles, so he knows that describing the physical world is
important, as well as putting in things to surprise the reader, let us
enjoy some moments without the whole thing being a plot chaser.

> I guess publishers no longer want the honest 200 page mystery - a length
> that does justice to most plots and characters.
I say at LEAST 200, but I prefer 250-350 (when a writer gets to four, then
I can say it's overwriting. Then again, my favorite writer, Ellroy, ALWAYS
puts out huge, 400+ page novels, and I love them.)

You said Dickens was a true hack, right?
I notice that plenty of authors make the top ten bestsellers list with
every plot filled, convaluted thriller they write, but are generally
reviewed badly for not being good writers. They only put in what advances
the plot, quickly, cliched, illogical sometimes. I prefer the ones who
take their time, but that's just my opinion. It's okay to disagree.
Everyone has their own tastes, then.

best wishes,
Anthony Smith
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