RARA-AVIS: On Leonard

Frederick Zackel (fzackel@bgnet.bgsu.edu)
Sat, 14 Feb 1998 10:11:52 -0500 (EST) Aloha y'all

I wrote a 24,000 word biography this past summer on Elmore Leonard for the
Dictionary of Literary Biography and a 4000-odd word piece on Leonard's
Out Of Sight for Encyclopedia of Pop fiction. The center of all that work
was a dozen hours of telephone interviews with Leonard himself, who is
really remarkable, although very low-profile. So I know a little about
how he works, etc. I learned lots about writing from him.

I think in some ways he works like Ross Macdonald, with variations on a
theme, one that has been carefully crafted. He has a formula. Usually a
white bad guy and a black bad guy team up; one will kill the other about
three-quarters from the ending, and the good guy will battle the survivor
and kill him in the last three pages. The bad guys have different names,
somewhat diferent characteristics, but they all seem to come from big vats
on the shelf. If you took all his blacks, they'd be a salad of a singl;e
black man. If you take all his whites, they'd be a salad of a single
white man.

All his homicide lieutenants, marshalls, etc., seem patterns on Will
Kane(?), from High Noon. (Can't go wrong, can you, with Gary Cooper?)
His women have become sharper, from Gold Coast through Killshot through
Out of Sight. He is more surefooted with practice.

Because his first Hollywood agent told him not to write series characters,
Leonard never has . . . well, sort of. But in City Primevil, there is
still one instance where the main character is called by the name of the
main character in the previous book. (Can you find it?)

Martin Amis in a NYTimes review some years back said Leonard's success was
based on his use of the present particple in sentence construction. When
Leonard saw that I'd used that in his biography, he instantly agreed with
Amis, and said, "Yes, I do!" I was surprised.

I think Out Of Sight is a masterpiece, like Glitz, Moonshine War, &
others. There is no lessoning of skill. I also read Cuba Libra in an ARC
from Delacorte in September. Leonard in high school was impressed with
Ernest Hemingway's "Spanish westerns" (i.e., For whom the bells toll,
etc.) At 72, Leonard wrote his, and I think he's better than Hemingway.
The work does NOT mimick the style of Hemingway, which would have been
devastating.

Last I heard he's halfway done with BE COOL, the sequel to Get Shorty. I
hope Leonard writes another ten books. (If only he'd quit smoking!)

Vaya con dios

Frederick Zackel

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