> I've read
> the first fifty pages of _Drowning Pool_. It seems
competent to me,
> with some good dialogue and descriptions. At the same
time, it often
> seems badly stagey and contrived....
The whole book itself, in terms of plotting, didn't really do
a
lot for me until I read it to the end, and then it all made
sense
and felt a lot better. I think that's a part of
MacDonald's
stylistic failure (or lack of incredible success, anyway);
there's
a level between the one-off lines, which can be quite good,
and
the interlocking puzzle of the whole plot, that he doesn't do
well
enough to be considered brilliant. It's as if he's showing
the
wrong pieces of the puzzle, or bringing them forth in an
uninteresting
order.
cjs
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